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Sunday, September 14, 2008

Island Fire

4. Simon

I think today went really bad for one of our fist days on the island. It was smart to build a fire, but it was horrible planning strategy everything was so inscrutable. We should have done it somewhere where we could have contained it more be cause it got rapt right when it caught on fire. we needed something better that would of caught on fie like a tendril. It was a bad idea to do it on the mountain because it can catch everything else on fire too. We should of counted everybody too so we new how many kids there were in the beginning, because it was a contrite that we lost one of the kids just because weren’t be responsible and that was a vicissitudes.

One thing that is really smart that we did was that we will use the conch to dis side who talks and how when we blow it it means there will be a meeting. I hope we can get off this island Ralph said that his dad will come to save us but Piggy says that no one nose where this island. I hope what they were saying about the queen has a map of all the islands so that they can find were we are.

3 comments:

Luis said...

i liked how you discribed what he felt and what he thought and what he did.

mikitow said...

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Bia said...

I like your story, It really shows what's happening in the story